im sorry but no. itz kinda boring..... : ( and i didnt understand the characters.... r all the guys in luv w/ each other? cuz u didnt make it clear and it sounded like they r.
this is a good idea but it's sorta confusing and not very clear. it also doesn't show the beginning middle and end so i got sorta confused. good idea tho!
i love the idea... if maybe there is more info than i would like it better.
ReplyDeletecool story cool charecters unclear story
ReplyDeleteHa ha ha that was very funny I liked it!!!!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteLOL characters are funny dont really like the story
ReplyDeletei dont like the names of the characters very much...otherwise it is a good story b/c there is alot of room to improve on it as a class
ReplyDeleteI like it needs a different plot but characters are sooo funny (my vote)
ReplyDeletei thought it was okay. I don't think that i will vote for it though. It was a good idea, it just needs some more work.
ReplyDeleteawesome characters! i'm not sure i really get the story at all. sry.
ReplyDeleteI think that the museum part should be more clear.
ReplyDeleteHow does it turn into the museum?
I think it would be good if the ending was better.
this idea is kind of vague, and I don't think that it is very desciptive or interesting. Maybe if you add more details, then it would be interesting.
ReplyDeletecool story idea,the way that thay deskrib the charactors is interesting.....
ReplyDeleteLOL i love ur characters they r rly awsome!!!
ReplyDeleteLOL i luv the characters they r so funny!!!
ReplyDeleteI think that your story has great ending and I liked all of your characters.
ReplyDeleteya ik dumb! sorry but needs work ): no vote ):
ReplyDeleteI think this story is pretty funny! LOL
ReplyDeletefunny nerdy dude! ha ha
ReplyDeleteUmmm i'm going to have to vote for this story.
ReplyDeletei dont like ur middle...i think it might work if its more creepy instead of the pop star thingy. sry...no vote :(
ReplyDeletelike it..but needs more work...and maybe more details...sry but its true
ReplyDeletei luv the plot but i think you could work on the ending and hav something more than it become a museum
ReplyDeleteVery usual mystery. The characters are good though. Make it more interesting when you write it.
ReplyDeleteim sorry but no. itz kinda boring..... : (
ReplyDeleteand i didnt understand the characters....
r all the guys in luv w/ each other? cuz u didnt make it clear and it sounded like they r.
this is a good idea but it's sorta confusing and not very clear. it also doesn't show the beginning middle and end so i got sorta confused. good idea tho!
ReplyDeleteThis story seems really good, and seems like it has a huge potential to grow.
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