Friday, October 10, 2008

Cursed Forest



This story includes a witch, a curse, and a squirrel named Squishy.

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15 comments:

  1. AnonymousOctober 13, 2008 at 7:31 AM

    sweet story. i like it a lot

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  2. AnonymousOctober 13, 2008 at 10:04 AM

    I like the cursed forest idea, but everything else was confusing to me.

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  3. AnonymousOctober 13, 2008 at 10:05 AM

    This story is really weird. There is too much weird stuff in it. TAKE SOME OUT, and then maybe it would be more interesting. All in all, I didn't really like it, BUT it was OK.

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  4. AnonymousOctober 13, 2008 at 10:06 AM

    THE CHARACTERS AND STORY ARE BOTH AWSOME!!!!!

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  5. AnonymousOctober 13, 2008 at 2:52 PM

    Ummm why did Bear-bait die? Also it's a little bit confusing and it needs some editing at the end.

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  6. AnonymousOctober 13, 2008 at 5:31 PM

    that was an intresting story! goodish but very confusing

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  7. AnonymousOctober 14, 2008 at 6:14 AM

    This is very confusing. Not a single sentence makes any sense. I can't follow the story.

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  8. AnonymousOctober 14, 2008 at 6:17 AM

    I liked the story it had good details, but I think that there was some weird things inside of it.

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  9. AnonymousOctober 14, 2008 at 1:44 PM

    definately action packed good plot in order to vote i would need some clarification on the plot sry

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  10. AnonymousOctober 14, 2008 at 2:34 PM

    i was a bit confuzzled <: /

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  11. AnonymousOctober 14, 2008 at 5:29 PM

    i could not follow the story...very comfusing!

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  12. AnonymousOctober 14, 2008 at 5:30 PM

    Is the cabin under water? How can the kids be in the forest if they are in an under water cabin? This story needs work but it gets my vote.

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  13. AnonymousOctober 15, 2008 at 2:42 PM

    I love this story idea. It's different and creative.
    (my vote)

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  14. AnonymousOctober 16, 2008 at 4:51 PM

    Okay...this story had no submerged cabin, but thank you for your input. To clarify,the reason this might have been hard to follow was because we hadn't used complete sentences, so when corn cake's particular organizer was used, we hadn't cleared the storyline and the plot up, and hadn't edited.

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  15. Garlic_Bread977October 16, 2008 at 5:01 PM

    Maybe it's because I know what happened, but it wasn't confusing to me.

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