Friday, October 10, 2008

Elsa the Wolf


One character in this story turns into a wolf to save the others...read more by clicking the picture to see a full-sized organizer.

11 comments:

  1. AnonymousOctober 13, 2008 at 7:37 AM

    Who runs after sally?

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  2. AnonymousOctober 13, 2008 at 9:49 AM

    I really liked this because it is interesting

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  3. AnonymousOctober 13, 2008 at 9:50 AM

    Now...why did Elsa start stalking Sally? And who is Sally in the first place...and to answer your question cookies'n'creeeeam I think that Elsa ran after Sally.

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  4. AnonymousOctober 13, 2008 at 10:07 AM

    Why does Elsa turn into a wolf?

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  5. AnonymousOctober 13, 2008 at 1:24 PM

    umm a little unclear, I don't really get it

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  6. AnonymousOctober 13, 2008 at 2:51 PM

    This story was really confusing. What is the point of it? The story isn't terrible, though.

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  7. AnonymousOctober 13, 2008 at 4:58 PM

    I am in the mood for werewolves and I think that one should have a place in a story, but I don't know that I'd waver in my vote. And the hunt for the necklace is interesting. I think that it'd be easier for someone to give their heart to a story if it had more detail.. Example: How did they get the necklace? What challenges did they overcome (or not) on their quest?...Things like that.

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  8. AnonymousOctober 14, 2008 at 6:08 AM

    I really liked the ending to your story, adn I liked your characters.

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  9. AnonymousOctober 14, 2008 at 6:13 AM

    i LUV it but..needs more detail on elsa and sally..plz! also is sally blind or something??? LUV IT!

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  10. AnonymousOctober 14, 2008 at 1:30 PM

    what r the characters like?????

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  11. AnonymousOctober 14, 2008 at 2:46 PM

    iz a work in progress. i liked how the werewolf (shape-shifter) was loyal....just a little bit confuzzling....good job tho

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