This idea seems to be all about the relationships...click the organizer to see them more clearly.
Friday, October 10, 2008
Lost and Found friends
This idea seems to be all about the relationships...click the organizer to see them more clearly.
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OMG the little hip-o dude w/ the afro @ the end! he's so CUTE! I like the story its funny! <3
ReplyDeleteI like your drawing!!!!!
ReplyDeleteso CUTE!!
I like the guy with the afro he is funny!
ReplyDeletei think it needs a better ending... something that leaves you w/ questions. i love the charactars!!!
ReplyDeleteneed more detail but cool!
ReplyDeleteawesome! i think its cute ^^
ReplyDeletethe story was cool/interesting....
ily!
what even happens in this story? It's just some people making out.
ReplyDeleteI didn't really like how in the organizer you used 1 letter to represent each name, it was very confusing.
ReplyDeleteP.S. Love the comment templar 13.
Like the characters and some of the plot needs a little chance is to do and would be easy to do Hip-O's pretty cool. (My vote I guess)
ReplyDeleteOk good but like too much of a romance novel, maybe a little more action!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteI think it is too much of a love story, but the organizer is really clear and easy to read.
ReplyDeleteOMG what is wrong with this I'll tell you whats wrong with it it needs more details and more action
ReplyDeleteyour story is a bit different than the others but it's cool
ReplyDeletei loved the story,it was so cute.I LOVED the little hipp-o dude at the end. I might vote for this story.
ReplyDeletefunny!! luv the "get a room." LOL. you'll probably get my vote!
ReplyDeletethis story is pointless. it is all about love, which I don't get, and what is the point of the
ReplyDeletehip-os? What happens when Lily gets captured by the hip-os??
good story hard to follow
ReplyDeleteThis story mad me laugh!!!!!!!!!!!! {My vote}
ReplyDeleteWith all due respect, (and I'll let you figure how much is due,) the story, to me, wasn't all that interesting. It was different, and funny, but not something I'd spend a lot of time working on. I think the artistry was cute, but novels don't have pictures and the storyline was a bit hard to follow. Don't get me wrong, it was one of the most creative stories, but you won't get my vote. Also, I'd like to remind everyone that this is homework for English, a subject that revolves around spelling and grammar, so please proofread and type as if you're writing a paragraph, without shortcuts and abbreviations.
ReplyDeletei think this story is really cool, and it is only notes, so it doesn't have to be super detailed. there could be a little more action, but i like the fact that it's a romance story. (vote)
ReplyDeleteI LUV the Hip-O's! LOL
ReplyDeletehip "O's" are awesome!!! I <3 this story! It has my vote!
ReplyDeletethis story seems so funny! i like the romance part and the fact that Lily and Max "hate" each other. I also love the monkey, Charles. and garlic_bread977, this is supposed to be notes, not a full story. the way they wrote it is fine. you totally get my vote!
ReplyDeleteI really dont under stand the C+d and what ever!
ReplyDeletewhat's is c and l and m? what is going on????
ReplyDeletethe name abbreviations were hard to understand but other than that it was a good story (My Vote)
ReplyDeleteyo i like the hipo dude
ReplyDeletethe name abbreviations were hard to understand but other than that it was a good story (My Vote)
ReplyDeleteThis is hard to understand.
ReplyDeleteThis story is amazing there is alot of love but it's cool.It gets my vote!
ReplyDelete!NICE HIP-O'S!
mi vote! iz awesome! i love max and lilly!
ReplyDelete<3<3<3<3<3<3<3333333 (hearts)
Hip-o is cool!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteGarlic_bread997 you have a point but most people know what the abbreviations are but it does get a bit annoying when peoples posts look like random symbols
ReplyDeletem = Max
ReplyDeletel = lily
c = charles
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