In the beginning, soldiers attack a village...
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Friday, October 10, 2008
Running from Soldiers, Ketzal babysits
In the beginning, soldiers attack a village...
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this is really confusing i can't even understand it with out turning my head to the side and it just doesn't make much sense to me but i think that if you organize it more this story had got some wicked potential. :)
ReplyDeletehugh?? -1 vote
ReplyDeleteThis story can really go far. I can't wait to see what it looks like when you put it all together. I really think that this story is exciting, and I think that it would be really cool to make this into a story. I really like this idea. {my vote}
ReplyDeleteI think this story could go far if you told what the escape plan was.
ReplyDeleteI love this story!
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i like this story it's very good
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I think this story is really good, but it was hard to read in this format.
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COOLIO.
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this story is brilliant!! i love the great ideas. {my vote}
ReplyDeleteI think that this story was very well thought out but a little hard to read and a little bit disorganized I think that this story has to be changed a little and then it will be a perfect outline for a nice and well thought out story. I think that you should probably cut out the joke part figure out who the traveler is and tell us who burned down the town. Over all this is a very good story and you can count on my vote.
ReplyDeleteThis is definitely the best organizer I have seen so far. It's very easy to read and understand, and the plot is something that you can definitely work off of to create a great story. (My vote).
ReplyDeleteGood job guys you got what no one else got. (my vote)
ReplyDeleteWhat time does this take place? I think it needs some more details but all in all this kicks.
ReplyDeleteI think it's a pretty good story with adventure packed into it. I'd vote for it if I hadn't already chosen another.
ReplyDeleteOMGizzle! yeah! its awesome! right
ReplyDeletethis story is hard to understand
ReplyDeletewhy is Ketsel babysitting!?
ReplyDelete?????..i really don't get this...sry
ReplyDeleteum...erm...i dont get it..?..maybe next time make the outline easyer to read!!
ReplyDeletei like your storyline, but what happens after they escape? where do they go? what happens to them while they are in london? do they try multiple times to get out?
ReplyDeletei like it, but no vote (second choice)
this was a good story, but it's hard to turn my computer sideways.
ReplyDeleteI think that this story was good but it was a little confusing.
ReplyDeleteThis is a great idea good plot
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ReplyDeleteI really like how the plan and events in this story fit together.My vote!
ReplyDeletewow! i liked it a bunch. it has some really great potential! oof! im reely torn b-tween ur story and the hip-o's! i might vote 4 u! we'll see!
ReplyDeleteAwesome story dude but is kinda confusing but this is MY VOTE!!!!
ReplyDeleteI love the story idea, it would be fun to watch it grow.
ReplyDeletei agree w/ 'corn cake'
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Hey we forgot to add that Sam thinks he can talk to fish and Jesse thinks she can turn herself into a baby deer (very important!)
ReplyDeleteCool. I like it alot and think that it would be my vote.!!!!!!!!!!!
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