I think that this story was an awesome story and since it had a troll im thinking about voting for it but right now i am not sure, otherwise I think that this story ROCKED!!!
Why does Bear-bait get eaten? If they are tied up over a pot, and get cut down, won't they fall into the pot? If they didn't know the way out, how where they able to get out from the same place they got in?
What is the point of this story?? nothing happens. Sure they escape, run away, and then run into people that are looking for them. THAT IS IT! how can people love this story? Je ne sais pas! SRY!! OH!!! I feel really badly right now because I just said all of that! SORRY! maybe if you added more events, then it would be a good story. VOTE FOR KETZAL BABYSITTING!
Why doesn't the troll kill them while their asleep? Also wouldn't the kids have heard about the troll? After all we're talking about something that can roam around at night eating villagers and farm animals at will. Wouldn't the troll have given more of a fight at the end? Will someone please respond to my posts please? It's really dumb when I post and only a couple people have responded.
I agree with mce7777 on the campaigning, but I'm not going to vote for this story. I think that the beginning was good, the middle okay, but it fell apart at the end. Did this group pool ideas or just each come up with a part. It looks like different handwriting, and the direction of the story was different then I'd expect from one person, that's just why I"m asking.
I really liked that idea you guys thought of. I think i want you guys to win the story.
ReplyDeletewhy did you pick a troll to be in the story.
ReplyDeleteI liked your story it was kinda entertaining!!!
ReplyDeleteI liked your story.It was very good.
ReplyDeleteI think that this story was an awesome story and since it had a troll im thinking about voting for it but right now i am not sure, otherwise I think that this story ROCKED!!!
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ReplyDeleteI thought the story made sense and was really good. My vote.
ReplyDeleteI think it was the best story, so you've got my vote
ReplyDeleteGood story, I like the troll idea, this is my vote.
ReplyDeleteI didn't really like this. It was rather gruesome. I guess it was ok, but maybe cut out all the gross stuff.
ReplyDeleteOk, let me get this straight. Did someone just get cut into pieces, cooked over a fire, and eaten?
ReplyDeleteI really like this story.But I think the troll should have put up a fight.
ReplyDeleteWhy does Bear-bait get eaten? If they are tied up over a pot, and get cut down, won't they fall into the pot? If they didn't know the way out, how where they able to get out from the same place they got in?
ReplyDeleteWhat happens to the Troll. Does come back and eat them or what?
ReplyDeleteMe and B lemon lime think that it was sad that bear-bait got boiled then eaten.
ReplyDeleteP.S. this was very unusual.
I like this story, I think that your imagination was used.(Vote)
ReplyDeleteim with mce7777 but otherwise sweet story...[my vote]
ReplyDeleteI like your story alot!!
ReplyDeleteI liked this story a lot it made sense and it was interesting.(my vote)
ReplyDeleteInteresting. Why couldn't the just walk home when it got light out? It was unexpected when Bear-bait got eaten. It was kind of funny in a gory way.
ReplyDeleteInteresting. Why couldn't the just walk home when it got light out? It was unexpected when Bear-bait got eaten. It was kind of funny in a gory way.
ReplyDeleteWhy did bear bait get eaten?If they were over the pot when they were cut down wouldn't they fall in?
ReplyDeletenice story idea you have my vote
ReplyDeleteThis story has alot of charactors.
ReplyDeleteyour story is very interesting but in a good way i really like it!!
ReplyDelete(my vote)
I love the troll idea:)
ReplyDeleteMY VOTE
i liked it! great story, but would need more details.
ReplyDeletegr8 job!
im with mce777 too but i think the story is awesome! maybe u could take out the gross parts and add some things but you've definetly got my vote!!
ReplyDeleteWhat is the point of this story?? nothing happens. Sure they escape, run away, and then run into people that are looking for them. THAT IS IT! how can people love this story? Je ne sais pas!
ReplyDeleteSRY!! OH!!! I feel really badly right now because I just said all of that! SORRY!
maybe if you added more events, then it would be a good story.
VOTE FOR KETZAL BABYSITTING!
NO CAMPAIGNING ON THE OTHER STORIES COMMENT PAGE(hamelakinz)!
ReplyDeleteThat's just low. JEEZ!
ahahha
this story is kind of confusing. not my favorite. there are parts that just don't make sense.
ReplyDeletethis is my vote.
ReplyDeleteWhy doesn't the troll kill them while their asleep? Also wouldn't the kids have heard about the troll? After all
ReplyDeletewe're talking about something that can roam around at night eating villagers and farm animals at will. Wouldn't the troll have given more of a fight at the end? Will someone please respond to my posts please? It's really dumb when I post and only
a couple people have responded.
Nice story! Keep up the good work =). [My Vote]
ReplyDeleteI agree with mce7777 on the campaigning, but I'm not going to vote for this story. I think that the beginning was good, the middle okay, but it fell apart at the end. Did this group pool ideas or just each come up with a part. It looks like different handwriting, and the direction of the story was different then I'd expect from one person, that's just why I"m asking.
ReplyDeleteI really like your story it is really cool (my vote)
ReplyDeletefunny ending (my vote)
ReplyDeleteI like the ideas so far so ya i just wanted to posta comment i was board so ya!
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