Friday, October 10, 2008

Will finds Sam and get Help


Will breaks his arm in this story and there is much more.
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18 comments:

  1. AnonymousOctober 13, 2008 at 7:31 AM

    SLOPPY!

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  2. AnonymousOctober 13, 2008 at 10:03 AM

    it is good but you cant read it very well and it needs more detail and interesting events!!!! Like funny people or CATS!!!!!

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  3. AnonymousOctober 13, 2008 at 10:04 AM

    I really don't get the point of the story.

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  4. AnonymousOctober 13, 2008 at 1:34 PM

    This is kinda confusing, but if you really look at it it might be a good story to read.

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  5. AnonymousOctober 13, 2008 at 3:49 PM

    like the the story (my vote)

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  6. AnonymousOctober 13, 2008 at 4:59 PM

    No offense, but too vague for my liking.

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  7. AnonymousOctober 13, 2008 at 5:00 PM

    Not sure of the obsession with cats, but it's not something that I really want to know the answer to.

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  8. AnonymousOctober 13, 2008 at 6:49 PM

    I don't really get the point of the story, and it didn't have much detail.

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  9. AnonymousOctober 14, 2008 at 6:10 AM

    I like it....but...next time, make it easier to read and neat-er....sry

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  10. AnonymousOctober 14, 2008 at 6:11 AM

    hmm..i like it but...needs more details and NEEDS TO BE NEATER!

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  11. AnonymousOctober 14, 2008 at 6:13 AM

    I think that this story is confusing maybe if there was a little more detail it would help.

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  12. AnonymousOctober 14, 2008 at 6:13 AM

    really good. ending need work. you got my vote!

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  13. AnonymousOctober 14, 2008 at 1:26 PM

    There is a good storyline there but i dont c the climax so if we were to use this i think we would need to build some excitement

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  14. AnonymousOctober 14, 2008 at 2:55 PM

    wow. mi tiny brain iz REELY confuzzled! where duz it start? where duz it end? needs some work.

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  15. AnonymousOctober 14, 2008 at 6:09 PM

    good story i like it
    (my vote)

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  16. AnonymousOctober 14, 2008 at 6:52 PM

    I liked it. It is funny.(my vote)

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  17. AnonymousOctober 16, 2008 at 12:49 PM

    This story is way to like real life. How many characters are interesting if they're just like you and me? How can a story be interesting if it could just as easily happen to me or you? Even storys that are based on real life are storys of amazing events that only rarely happen to a small percentage of people who live (or lived)on earth. So please make your storys NOT like every day events.

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  18. AnonymousOctober 17, 2008 at 6:55 PM

    i think this is way too vague and doesn't really have a plot. but if you put some thought into it and actually made a point and a climax, this could be a good story.

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